~ LolololololoL! ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
April 27,2010.
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I’m Ms. Nivedita no Stickjawed poseur Au fait mandiblectual LolololololoL! screaming for an urgency to see various faces of a so called 'intellectual'....a pretense can't survive long and at the same time steal the credit while an 'intellectual' shies away...is lost before found....'stickjawed poseur' defines the intensity experienced by a fake to overcome weaknesses, inability to be....what shouldn't be...LOLouuuud....
Reading poem and some comments my feelings are I’m Ms. Nivedita no/Stickjawed poseur/Au fait mandiblectual /LolololololoL! Here Poet expressed and used [unsavoir] words and concepts…may be they’re reading it textually…or idiosyncratic to accept it …poetry is vast esplanade…readers have right to comment and critique…i sincerely welcome it… honor too.. We’ve seen many pseudo intellectuals and get mileage and byteage but true intellectuals are behind the screen…or under the carpet… The word used by Poet [confessed with honesty] ‘no poseur’ ‘stickjawed- mandiblectual…her utter helplessness she feels… We must read in-between lines Poet writes, ‘I shun revel wassail/Normal senses…actually these are nothing but ‘abnormally normal’ … [concocted, masked senses] …here she retorts and justly…what is called normal senses are they without matching with true to aesthetics.....many such are flooding PH Post modern type poem with a definite message… 10++
A very weird and slack jawed poem for some folks to enjoy. Keep on writing and I soon will began to understand your poetry. Lynn
What I’ll do if I’m with zero aesthetics…Give me that/Rocky ricrac heart/To embellish emblazon/Bonanzas of smiling Daisy! ’ fine finery of feelings… Indeed what we claim as Knowledge may be half learning…vide infra Poet satires with, Give me that/Stupid intelligence/To underunderstand/Intelligent stupids! [Note 'underunderstand'] Excellent ‘poetic-remembrencer’ and memo to me 10++ dr. sakti
True Poetry de-cranes our false ego…slicing satire into miniscule… So many intellectuals are there who claim and create hype and hoopla by pet ‘yes-man’ media soon but soon disdained by true lovers of intellect aesthetics Thanks …indeed good poem 10++
Highly sarcastic poetry … Like beware of [being] ‘mandiblectual’…and warning poster in front of them… Poseur or pseudos…are trash…just show piece…like white elephant 10+ AB London
Poet is courageous as ever…phew out so called ‘Au fait mandiblectual’… Terrific write up with trendy English and coupled-words… Her grit I salute … 10++
Quasi and pseudo intellectuals are master in complicating simple things… Poet’s imageries are wisely designed…hey such intellectuals hearing the poet’s appeal… Be not a poseur…be guileless and see white as white and black as black…okay 10+++ Dr. V
Surrealistic poem…where bow and swing of images…and contradictory and paradoxical…may seem to readers Nice word coupling ‘mandiblectual’ intellects are petrified in mandible …good word satire… Poet is transparent and outspoken in say…admits not intellectual she is …as like many poseurs 10++ PO PO
'Give me that Stupid intelligence To underunderstand Intelligent stupids! ' And of course the title of the poem make me laugh with joy at you child like nature even though you have a mature way of writing poetry. I must share this with some one; Lol
Well you started this craft with stupid word and line...so I guess this is stupid all the way. I mean you played with strange and funny lingo and it is undecipherable for me. At least this is a unique and weird form of poetry or expression.
Well you started with a stupid word and line...and I think this craft is also stupid in nature. You play strange and funny words which are undecipherable. At least this is a unique form of poetry. Thanks
Give me that Stupid intelligence To underunderstand Intelligent stupids..... hi let us remain stupid intellegent only.. nicely presented feeling.. liked it most.....10 read mine m in tears...at least say no
You definitely have a way with words, and i am sure you have the intelligence that assists you in using those words to create wonderful poems - with a difference
mandiblectual? Maybe I'm the only one who doesn't know what that means. Is it a mix of mandible and intellectual, as in you speak you mind and individuality? I'm pretty sure I liked it even without understanding the last bit
‘Petite elfin normal! ’, ‘…Nivedita no/Stickjawed poseur/Au fait mandiblectual’ It’s a poem with some difference …what is claimed by so called Intellectuals Poet has put humorous hammered satire and its just… Poets must have free flow of emotion like ‘Rocky ricrac heart’, ‘…emblazon Bonanzas of smiling Daisy! ’ A crispy poetic treat …thanks for sharing… 10++
An eye opener poem here ‘Intelligent stupids! ’ Used as a symbol who is masking and quasi or quarter [or less] intelligent. Actually such persons are high nosed and upstart. A good joke ‘He is great Pundit who can make simple thing complex and complex into utter complex’… Another is ‘Intelligent is one who writes more foot-notes that true notes’…lolol Better to underlearn from suchs…nice wording and concept navigating thanks 10++
Intelligent stupids boy have seen a lot of them when drink is around including myself and you bisect it with wisdom words as usual Niv in your original style...magic...10/10...regards