Monday, August 24, 2015

Lollipop Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lollipop is one type of sweet on a small stick,
Lolly is like lollipop, children eat, enjoy and flick.
Lonely life is painful children feel well,
Lollipop can avoid loneliness together they dwell.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Salim R Javed xLovely piece... :) 24 Aug 2015 by Salim R Javed | Reply picture of Rohan ******* xbeautiful and a yummy piece sir... 24 Aug 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xvery nice poem 24 Aug 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xWell composed, Sir, Thank you. 25 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Mfena Ortswen xNice one, Kumarmani. 25 Aug 2015 by Mfena Ortswen | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xA whimsical enchanting write! 25 Aug 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of Gary Lee xexcellent...a true artist 25 Aug 2015 by Gary Lee | Reply

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Designed with starting 'L', children's with lollipop, enjoyed well,

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 September 2015

Lonley life is painful. That's really the truth. Thank you.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2015

Lollipop is loved by all. Let love be shared by all. Beautiful message delivered through the poem. Thank you.

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* Sunprincess * 26 August 2015

..............nice poem...thank you for sharing ★ Love we must seek we must love to all

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Valsa George 26 August 2015

'Love to God, love to country parents should teach, Loveless life is like a desert it brings pain to each'............. Very meaningful lines! Enjoyed the poem!

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Kelly Kurt 24 August 2015

A lovely poem by a gifted thinker and poet

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David Wood 24 August 2015

Children are the future of the world and should be cherished, loved and educated to take over where we left off. Lovely poem I really enjoyed reading.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 August 2015

Lovely are the children, lovely are flowers and parent, Lovely are countries, environment and persons inherent. Love we must seek we must love to all, Leap should be taken for shake off emotion’s fall. What a lovely poem! ..........................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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