Friday, April 22, 2016

Lola Comments

Rating: 2.8

Below the orange-tree
She washes cotton clothes.
Her eyes are green.
Her voice a violet hue.
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Tom Billsborough
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Sriranji Aratisankar 21 July 2016

Excellent piece of poet-craft.10 for you.

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Tom Billsborough 21 July 2016

Thank you, Sriranj. Lorca was a great inspiration. Tom

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 April 2016

Below the orange-tree She washes cotton clothes. Her eyes are green. Her voice a violet hue. Ah! Love below The blossoming orange-tree. Beautiful expression. Nice poem. 10 for it.

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Tom Billsborough 22 April 2016

Lorca and Pablo Neruda are my favourite poets in Spanish. I think this one is based upon one of his gypsy melodies. Thank you for your comments. Tom

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