Sunday, September 4, 2005

Lois And Luke Comments

Rating: 4.9

Two arms to wrap around them,
A hand to wipe a tear,
These little ones are part of me,
Of that, it's pretty clear.
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Ernestine Northover
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Your poem is just adorable. I really loved the 'four eyes of blue' as it just struck a chord with me. And the names Lois and Luke do their alliteration so well.... Karin Anderson

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Andrew Blakemore 29 July 2008

What a lovely poem of family bliss. Really enjoyed this one. Love, Andrew xx

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Duncan Wyllie 23 January 2006

Well Ernestine What A beautiful Circle.............. God bless...

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Mary Nagy 06 September 2005

Ernestine, If I didn't know better I would think I wrote this! (I hope you arn't offended by that) We really do have a similar style don't we? I love this poem. Your grandkids are very lucky to have such a wonderful grandma. Sincerely, Mary

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