Monday, August 10, 2009

Logic Comments

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I remember
Walking down the haunted avenue
Of my childhood dreams
A lady in blue casting spell
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
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Meggie Gultiano 14 August 2009

a nice write..thanks

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Anjali Sinha 12 August 2009

o kamran dear when are you gonna get out this so called phase of yours of 'sadness' i dont like your sad poems and dont like to label you as a 'dark one' but otherwise a good write anjali

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That little lady, gave you the clue to your sadness. Meditation is a good way to stop thinking, and stop the head working too hard. Through poetry you express your thinking, so keep thinking and keep these great poems coming. 10 Karin Anderson

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Indira Babbellapati 10 August 2009

o, yes, doc...thinking is the most difficult profession...

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Aijaz Asif 10 August 2009

dude...when ever I read any of your work, it feels like I'm reading my own thoughts through your blessed pen...... keep on going brother keep on writing and I'll collect tears from the words you scribble those dreams which I felt are broken and melt I picked with a yearn and hope it will mend.... asif rgds with many 10'ssssss asif

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Rehana Nazli 10 August 2009

what a logic to your sadness! I am not convinced Dr Kamran, I think you feel sad because you are reflective on your past and thoughtful about your present. A good poem to practice logic logical behaviour!

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Milica Franchi De Luri 10 August 2009

Knowledge and over analyzing can bring misery sometimes............perhaps ignorance is a bliss. I love the poem..... Thank you Milica

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