Logic Games (Repeating Words) Comments

the working of a logical mind. good david.

Very well written piece of excellence David Intelligent, but more than that, , the emotion comes across intact Love duncan X

There is a logical progression of thought as you reason each emotion in this introspective musing on relationships. An intriguing write David, j x

i really enjoyed this poem for its preciseness and crispness! keep it up!

Stuning beautiful eloquent and profound I can't think of anything else to say you must be really proud of this piece thank you for giving me the chance to read it Nik

I like this, very clever with the first line of each stanza rhyming, works to great effect - but above all it's the message that comes across. Seems it's the same no matter what age. Good penning. HG: -) xx

Consistent reasoning by cleverness.... you'll figure it out at your TENder age..