Friday, January 19, 2018

Lodestar Comments

Rating: 4.0

When You are flying in the sky
Suddenly the light disappears
And darkness blinds your eyes
What could you do than to cry
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Akhtar Jawad 04 November 2020

Such a star is an evidence that there is a God who has created this universe. A thoughtful poem.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 03 September 2020

sometimes darkness gives power, good

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Robert Murray Smith 24 July 2018

Rini, I loved this imaginative poem.++++10 Robert

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Rebecca Navarre 24 March 2018

A Beautifully Touching And Inspiring Painting! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rini Shibu 25 March 2018

Thanks Rebecca Navarre for reading and commenting

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2018

To guide your way! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 25 March 2018

Thanks Edward..sorry for the delayed response

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 20 January 2018

To keep flying amidst darkness blurring the vision is a great inspiration. One of your greatest motivational poems Rini, thanks for this sharing. 10++++ Subhas

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Rini Shibu 20 January 2018

Thanks Subhas for reading and commenting

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Lamar Cole 19 January 2018

Great and inspiring poem filled with hope.

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Rini Shibu 20 January 2018

Thanks Lamar for posting your remarks Rini

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 January 2018

A very inspiring write beautifully crafted. Yes, we should keep on flying.Darkness should not be a hindrance. A great piece.10

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Rini Shibu 20 January 2018

Thanks Rose for posting your comment Rini

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