Thursday, July 9, 2009

'Locked Up Emotions' Comments

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Why did you have to be so cruel?
Why did you have to be a fool?
Dad you ruiend my soul but I survived.
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Aamnah Akhtar 12 July 2009

Whoa.. i am left shaken... strong lines...

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the poem is penned well, and the flow is good, but the message behind it is not much clear..

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