Locked Eyes Comments

Very enjoyable! Loved it.

a great write...Beautiful.I like it

Its so wonderful a feeling to read The eternal relation taken fold... I rememeber a quote.... to be told 'It is wrong to think that love comes from Long companionship and persevering courtship. Love is the offspring of spiritual affinity and Unless that affinity is created in a moment, It will not be created for years or even generations” Enjoyed the feeling of Love expressed in this poem.

'where the effect of time became inconsequent...' Beautiful poem with sensible imagery. The last lines sums it all so vividly.

You have rightly captured the spirit of the theme. I am reminded of one of Mukesh's songs written by Hasrat Jaipuri: 'Dil ke nazar se, nazron ke dil se'. What do you say about 'nazron ke dil se? '. We will be thinking about it for the whole lifetime. Your poem also reflects the same essence. Good.

This piece has love...and sounds spiritual too...I suppose these words were conceived while you were on flight.....interesting and lovely

I'm a firm believer it's all about timing. Is it miraculous when two souls fall into the same instant in time? Perhaps we all exist at the same point in time because we are all interconnected. Problem is that we don't always have our eyes open. Nicely done! Linda

Nicely done. A moment outside Time, well expressed.

Eye to eye, heart to heart, soul to soul, what moment sweet to look into each other's mind. Adorable and romantic.

Nicely penned expressions! concise and sweet.10

Very sweet and romantic. A moment in time one does not often forget. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

the meeting of soulmates

the meeting of soulmates

Powerful expression. Well penned. Nice to read. deserves 10101010101010

Locked eyes, a poem written so beautifully, thank you Vaibhav 10 Lynda xx

wow! wonderful work out! thoughtful eloquence that captured a lot in short! 10+

very well expressed..words beautifully compressed. I love most this line..... withstanding even the barrier of time. I love this, Vaibhav.

a meanigful poem...an awesome write.....10

locked eyes, locked the moments too snatched out of jawas of time, a life worthwhile and truly true....this couldnt have been written by anyone else but wonly you.... great poem

You use a most evocative metaphor to help you describe a moment in time beyond time when the essence of who you really are is truly manifest. Love can do that to you (if you're lucky) . Great theme. Great poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥