Locked Away Deeply Comments
Stored and discreetly labelled are my dreams.
Time's woven net hides desire in mid-flight.
Our moments, like locked away gems, still gleam
But stay out of sight in dawn's piercing light.
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True poetry is timeless. Haunting last lines. You shine on poemhunter, Fay. Never say farewell. Love from one of your many far away friends, Sandra
In the dark labyrinths of the mind a portal contains, two hearts entwined access denied to all but one to be relived in the evening sun
Fay, this one gave me the shudders (in a good way) . Top class piece of writing. Regards, Ian
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8/22/2025 1:00:31 AM # 1.0.0
This is first i read your poem! I am touched by this heartfelt eloquence! the last couplet REMARKABLE! 10+