Tuesday, April 28, 2020

Lockdown- 34th Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Opening wings the white clouds flying high sky
No rain juice today falling on my city ground
Drinking sunny rays I feel headache in closed noon
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Indira Renganathan 29 April 2020

I am reminded of one great couplet viz thirukkural which says 'laugh while in sorrow for nothing better than laughter can drive away sorrow'....your poem though otherwise means a lot about the present dolorous situation it still carries facts about the other side of life with the consequences of corona....enjoyed your poem with hearty prayers for the welfare of the sufferers10/10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 April 2020

maha maha maha acchaaa good mb of bd u r keep healthy drink water its better

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