Tuesday, April 21, 2020

Lockdown- 27th Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Raining cats and dogs started fair journey
This soaked morning stood alone in vacuity

Lanes after lane city buildings are lifeless tombs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 April 2020

I love your beautiful descriptions, such as, Do not let panic be friend by staying home as ghost in flower. The coming beauty of summer, after illness and death, is evoked quite well in your poem.

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Somali Mukherjee 21 April 2020

An excellent poetic piece.... " Awaken deity mother won't come to awake the dead temple If we do not awake our inside heart like the flying high eagle" - -Stuffed with great philosophical overtone. Enjoyed every line of the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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