Lockdown- 25th Day Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Lockdown- 25th Day

Rating: 5.0


Have to go forever leaving this dark home
feeling sorrow that nobody will know my last
Silently risen meteor will go to dark gravity burst

Won't update last words of tears before love junction
From unspoken brine won't breathe the last sensation
Won't see nearest blood if this ominous mission keep going on

slowly green to ripe and towards withered
hungriness in the world of unstable motion
death in the chain of life prying recycling born

Birth fixes the death in commencing its journey on this earth
In time asking forgiveness feels regretful more than gratitude
through pure repentance everything under constructed redemption code

I'm here today not as the hunger striker
Feeling regret for full free natural future

19.04.2020 (Chattogram City)

Sunday, April 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: expression,feelings,regret
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 April 2020

A poignant write. 25 days of being lock down not enjoying life to its fullest is hard for everyone. However, everything shall come to pass. And so is this darkness. There will be light that will come at the very end of this darkness. Loneliness and sadness are vividly presented and well conveyed.

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Raniya Mukherjee 20 April 2020

Hey Bangalee Babu, I am also bangalee but what are you doing - writing indiscreet poems? Gives you happoness? It is boring us and you are busy praising any poet. like a chamcha. Have you no self-respect? why are you so hungry for fame? are you getting money by praising others or wrting pani-puri kind poetry. Go to Howrah and..........

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Akhtar Jawad 19 April 2020

Feelings of a poet nicely painted.

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