Monday, April 13, 2020

Lockdown- 19th Day Comments

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No fault in the moon
Apple wine quenches night thirst
Rain-less cloud to sun
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Edward Kofi Louis 13 April 2020

Vastness! ! ! ! In you i feel hot! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 April 2020

Lovely created, but please explain to me, what is: Welcome the new year The Bengal Boishakh beauty? Since there are no poet's notes, I must ask you personally for the explanation. Thank yiou beforehand, Mahtab! Beautiful tercets here. The verb of Breath is Breathe, please. Thank you for your attention. We may here in the Netherlands walk out of the house when we wish, but I teach at home online. now

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 April 2020

the Bengal Boishakh beauty- Bengal New Year's Festival Happy New Bengali Year-1427 (14th April) and thanks for your correction

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