Lockdown- 17th Day Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Lockdown- 17th Day

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Busy path was that
Like before but less walker
Beside the rail line

Grasses are growing
Greeny lives now on that path
Decorating well

At the setting sun
Your spreading two hands as if
wanna hug pink sky
Emptiness walking speedy
with pang tears in world home

Dove of evening time
Calling from far forlorn bush
As an fear angel

Face of off TV
Trembling the inside grief nerves
Cause death news still on

Sound proof time bombs on world air
Blasting step by step in whole
As life-destroyer
Made of biochemical
By secret agent as curse

Before the mirror
I'm dreaming that bomb near me
Brightest moon went far
Probably next sun no more
Through my window crystal glass

Yet I'm screaming here
It's dream, maybe mind will die
Heart will get rebirth
My soul will be immortal
For world I'm the one true love



11.04.2020 (Chattogram City)

Saturday, April 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: expression,feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 12 April 2020

At the setting of the sun! ! ! Watching the muse of nature; Locked down. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Happy Reader 11 April 2020

You a poet or a cupid? Very strong but not effective poem - too much confusion of words I love you as you good and more effective in your comments for other poets.

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 11 April 2020

to the point finely set

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