Wednesday, April 8, 2020

Lockdown- 14th Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today's sky of the earth was calmly graceful
Sweetened mouth absorbed the whirling mind full
Nothing was there in my solitude thinking
Subconsciously I observed your loyal dancing
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Savita Tyagi 10 April 2020

Lock down is hard. We are going through all kind of emotions and feelings. thankfully your pen is a great companion to ride this crisis. Lovely poem has emerge from it. Stay well and safe dear friend. this shall pass.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 April 2020

There is time for everything! ! Just be strong! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 09 April 2020

Excellent piece.....thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 April 2020

Brilliant poetic expression! Appreciated......10+++++

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 April 2020

'Cloudless mild breeze through drizzling Touched inside your stainless body with dancing I saw thy shaking heart on the blue sky As an ascetic truth seeker on mystical high'... is beautiful poetry. A nice creation during lock down, Thanks for sharing.

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