Saturday, January 6, 2007

Lock Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Reality no longer
Tick-tocking by
Yeild to the lock of the daily grind
Wheels oiled
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Angel Amarante
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Marilyn Lott 02 May 2008

It sounds like you have a lot going for you and have an understanding of the direction you are headed. A 'Woman of Substance' is a wonderful phrase and also a wonderful book by Barbara Taylor Bradford. Your poem has a lot of heart. I give it a '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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