Friday, March 6, 2009

Lock-In Mentor Comments

Rating: 4.9

One decade young now court protected
broken law or broken trust one selected
qualifying supervised life and school
learning behavioral and societal rule
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wonderful tribute and fine meter... great poetry

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Sandra Fowler 09 March 2009

Wonderful tribute. Your wife is a great human being. And you write very sensitive, memorable poetry. I like what you see from your own personal window on the world, Jim. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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Tsira Goge 06 March 2009

Jim, it's very vital picture - poems... You have expressed of true the think...10. Tsira

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Christian Guice 06 March 2009

i great dedication i like it alot

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Catrina Heart 06 March 2009

i felt melancholy in this nice poetic narration woven with fine rhymes....10+++

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