Lock And The Key Comments

pain is the key to love. nice

An insightful write that seems right.+++10

Very nice writing. Thanks for posting.

Hi Rini, Beautiful poem on love and the associated pain, may I say! You state, Love and pain both are inter linked Pain is the single pill for the love Because pain increases the longing and longing intensifies the love... Well done. A 100++

Hi Rini, The Lock and Key is a symbol of love acknowledged by lovers all over the world. I have walked through two bridges, one in Koln in Germany and one in Paris in France. Along the bridge thousands of locks can been seen. I was unaware of its significance, until, i actually saw them. When i read your poem, i went back into the memory lane of these beautiful bridges. Let me quote your last verse: Love and pain both are inter linked Pain is the single pill for the love Because pain increases the longing and longing intensifies the love I love your style of writing. :) - A big 10 for you!

Without pain you won't gain love And pain disappears once you get love pain increases the longing and longing intensifies the love...you are writing from experience about love and pain. how true u are in your words. a very nice poem.. thank u for this poem. genova

Rini I love the way you used the play on words..how love gets locked and unlocked :) 10+

As light is accentuated by darkness, pain intensifies love! After a mild quarrel, lovers come together with greater warmth and understanding! This is usually proved true not only with regard to lovers but in most cases! I greatly admire your concluding lines, Rini!

Rini, a profound philosophical work of art. And I love your symbols: lock and key. How many of us have found that the key to writing good poetry is through pain and suffering. And once the poem is written, the door to love has been opened with that key.

If pain becomes wound, love becomes balm to heal life. Love and pain both are inter linked. Appearance and disappearance both are mutual. Brilliant perceptional poem you have shared...10