Monday, May 8, 2006

Lock And Key Comments

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We all are lock and key
Don’t you see?
Every key fits in two locks
Every lock has two fitting keys
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Kevin Deckert
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Sarah Mkhonza 04 November 2016

I like the way you use imagery in this poem So true. Thanks for sharing21265

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Michael Gale 07 June 2006

Pretty niftey little poem. Nice wrirte. God bless-Michaeel Jeffrey Gale.

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And your how old now? Lolz Great poem and i agree with sylvia a true poem of wisdom and meaning. your a great poet and dont you ever forget that... Hope youve found your matching lock and key... as for me.... I have a long way to go... Great job Love, Missy

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Sylvia Spencer 09 May 2006

This Kevin is a poem of wisdom, for someone of such a young age you sure have a lot of it. I thought this poem was great. You might like to read my poem, A little Poem of Wisdom! cheers Sylvie

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Goldy Locks 08 May 2006

how wow. how wise, Kev. this was a brillant idea & you fleshed it out very well. there was comical ring to it while simultaneously intwining a most profound thought- i would say, shorten the last paragraph (or so it crescends & grows to a peak where the reader steps back n says i get it! i get it all ;) Sus.

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