Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Local At 9.23 A.M. Comments

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LOCAL AT 9.23AM

suddenly a lull overshadows the otherwise noisy platforms
as the train passes by leaving one of its commuter
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Rajkumar Mukherjee
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Ravi A 23 April 2009

Use 'departed soul' instead of 'departing..'. The last four lines actually elevate the sense of the theme. Yes. This is life. Danger lurks in every angle. The loved ones will be in long prayers at home. Life is a perpetual motion, a ceaseless cycle. Many deaths occur around us. We witness them. We sigh. We will be in tears for a day or two but return to our routine in no time. This in one way is the reclaim of the normalcy of life. System will take care of itself. Otherwise, how can life be in progress?

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Subroto Chatterjee 08 April 2009

Ki Rajkumar Moshoi, Ki Lekhechain! Khoob Bhalo! Vey poignant, moving. Touching. Alas, this happens every day. Take care, moshoi. Subroto.

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