Loaves And Fishes Comments

This is well done. I love the way you tell the story and weave in a modern economics concept to explain God. I enjoyed this.

Quality poem in a religious 10

I'll take your word on this, that the story of this miracle shows THE BOUNTEOUS PROVISION OF GOD. I prefer the immediacy of FAITH'S TOUCH, FAITH'S WONDER. If a poem gives time and space to think about a miracle, I lose faith because if the arbitrary nature of miracles. But that shouldn't in any way deter your writing. There are many believers who will be moved by your carefully composed and heart-felt by your poetic update of the biblical story. You are using your poetic gifts to renew the sacred story for believers.