Friday, January 13, 2012

Loathing Christmas Comments

Rating: 4.5

Longing under the moon of damns and darkness
Feral tantrums of woe begins its address
My decent self had not but bawled its sadness
On the praised, inculcated and sulted mistress
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Shabati Dokyu
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Ency Bearis 16 January 2012

Impressive poem and great use of rhyme scheme, well penned thoughts

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