Monday, July 2, 2007
Loaded Gun Comments
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Load a gun with your dreams,
Fire them if you dare.
Just hope that you don't catch a little shrapnel.
This world will tear you apart if you let it.
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William Jackson
02 July 2007
I like your poem, especially the last stanza. I like the title and the idea of loading dreams into a gun and being cautious and all to keenly aware that life is easily shattered.
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7/26/2025 6:55:21 PM # 1.0.0
Like a true gun..(gun donnot kill, man does) , life is what we make it. It is all up to us if we want to be happy or miserable, rich or poor, etc. There is a right time when toThanks. pull the trigger. Important is we know our dreams and what to do about it. Worth the 10.