Saturday, April 3, 2010

~ Lo: Gotten Divine ~ Comments

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~ Lo: Gotten Divine ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
April 3,2010
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MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
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David Beckham 25 August 2010

Spiritual upliftment of the greatest order. This outta be the medicine for self awakening. THanks for sharing

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Katang Chakravorty 12 June 2010

‘One hundred percent benign… Lookin’ for Divine Zeroing canine Poetry sublime’ 10++

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Lynn Glover 28 May 2010

A wee poem that carries a mighty impact. A good write. Lynn

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Indeed a dip-deep and profound poem … Highly symbolic Canine = Animal Instinct Malign =Evil or harmful Benign = Pleasant and beneficial [humane instinct] Finally DIVINITY Whaoo beautiful Voted 10+

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Dr. V. Chakravorty 17 April 2010

A poetic sojourn from low instinct to Highest Instinct Power packed message in just wee capsules like latest generation antibiotics to kill bacterias [Canine]..life saving …life giving too 10+++ Dr. V.

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Neat nifty Ohh lofty Full of benign Soused in Divine! 10++ dr.sakti

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Sandra Fowler 16 April 2010

I like your rhymes and your innovative poetic vision. Take care, Warmest regards, Sandra

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Louis Rams 15 April 2010

your play of words can be heard.

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Cute Beaut and beau ideal Your uncanny way to make complex a simple we enjoy always… wonderful hobnobbing of words….into the full octave... 10+

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nature 360 15 April 2010

Your poems always carry a hidden meaning. See the face of a drug addict as he converses with the divine. I remember a story; in a village a person lost one of his eyes. People began to call him kana. One day he thought why not a village of Kana's; so he said he could see the divine. a person with little mind blinded his one eye but when he did not see the divine he wanted to say no Divine. The first kana said don't be a fool and say you see him or just the two of us will be called kana's. Well he and the others to follow were so eloquent that the whole village became a village of kana's except one. Poor fell later became one for he could not stand to be call a non Kana. Hope the world does not become full of addicts.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 11 April 2010

Canine, malign, benign, Divine! Rhymes well.

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Noel Horlanda 10 April 2010

nice work adorned with perfect rhyme

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Braja K Sarkar 09 April 2010

Wonderful! ! ! Nice to read..10++

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Photode Photode 09 April 2010

‘Lo Gotten Matchless Mansion’ ….and its all about this poem… Thanks for such a great poem 10+++

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Carol Gall 07 April 2010

your words twine like flowes

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Ency Bearis 07 April 2010

A vast meaning of this poem and has every angle to interpret it, nice concept.

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Eyan Desir 06 April 2010

What is the theme of the poem?

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 06 April 2010

This poem can be understood on many levels depending on one's understanding/one's values and or belief...which makes for great poets and their work.A 10+++

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Amitabha Bagchi 05 April 2010

Very much contemplative poem where ascent from ‘HumaNness’ [Canine Malign] to HumaNeness [Divine] in very moot way … Wisdom engineered in a Masterly way …the essence and prime focus of Veda … 10+++ AB London

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Sadiqullah Khan 05 April 2010

Compelling language, Gods, Dogs, Divinity put together in a masterly crafted piece. Thanks for sharing.10++

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