~ Lo: Gotten Divine ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
April 3,2010
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‘One hundred percent benign… Lookin’ for Divine Zeroing canine Poetry sublime’ 10++
Indeed a dip-deep and profound poem … Highly symbolic Canine = Animal Instinct Malign =Evil or harmful Benign = Pleasant and beneficial [humane instinct] Finally DIVINITY Whaoo beautiful Voted 10+
A poetic sojourn from low instinct to Highest Instinct Power packed message in just wee capsules like latest generation antibiotics to kill bacterias [Canine]..life saving …life giving too 10+++ Dr. V.
Neat nifty Ohh lofty Full of benign Soused in Divine! 10++ dr.sakti
I like your rhymes and your innovative poetic vision. Take care, Warmest regards, Sandra
Cute Beaut and beau ideal Your uncanny way to make complex a simple we enjoy always… wonderful hobnobbing of words….into the full octave... 10+
Your poems always carry a hidden meaning. See the face of a drug addict as he converses with the divine. I remember a story; in a village a person lost one of his eyes. People began to call him kana. One day he thought why not a village of Kana's; so he said he could see the divine. a person with little mind blinded his one eye but when he did not see the divine he wanted to say no Divine. The first kana said don't be a fool and say you see him or just the two of us will be called kana's. Well he and the others to follow were so eloquent that the whole village became a village of kana's except one. Poor fell later became one for he could not stand to be call a non Kana. Hope the world does not become full of addicts.
‘Lo Gotten Matchless Mansion’ ….and its all about this poem… Thanks for such a great poem 10+++
A vast meaning of this poem and has every angle to interpret it, nice concept.
This poem can be understood on many levels depending on one's understanding/one's values and or belief...which makes for great poets and their work.A 10+++
Very much contemplative poem where ascent from ‘HumaNness’ [Canine Malign] to HumaNeness [Divine] in very moot way … Wisdom engineered in a Masterly way …the essence and prime focus of Veda … 10+++ AB London
Compelling language, Gods, Dogs, Divinity put together in a masterly crafted piece. Thanks for sharing.10++
Spiritual upliftment of the greatest order. This outta be the medicine for self awakening. THanks for sharing