Tuesday, August 30, 2016

Lizzy From The Old Village Of Campile Comments

Rating: 5.0

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She's my Lizzy from the old village of Campile,
With her weird fashions that are always in style,
And she lightens all my worries when she smiles,
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Mai Murphy Venn
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Hazel Durham 30 August 2016

Love this stunning poem with superb rhyming and imagery, the rhythm and musicality that flows as smooth like a rivers journey through the beauty of the love he has for his Lizzy!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 August 2016

She's my Lizzy from the town of old Campile, With her weird fashions that are always in style, And she lightens all my worries when she smiles, It's very plain to see, that she is the one for me, She's my Lizzy from the town of old Campile. Beautiful poem, nicely written.10 for it. Thanks for the sharing. Subhas

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