Saturday, May 19, 2018

Lizzie (A Comment On Forgive Me My Lord - By Kostas Lagos) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The increasing distance
between me and my God
has blurred His image,
that was already dim.
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Priyani Lekamwattage 23 December 2019

There is a humour in this poem but I like.

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Khalida Bano Ali 24 June 2018

A thoughtful poem, a wonderful write.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 May 2018

While distance between God and self increases this provokes thought. From Lizzie of Shakespeare's time to the Lizzie of your time we can feel the difficulties. A poem written in funny mood has become good essence for readers. We need close relationship with God. This timeless poem is excellently penned....10

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Ha ha ha..so funny. I concur with Kostas wonderful comment. Beautifully crafted write.10

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Kostas Lagos 20 May 2018

Yes, marriage can be the reason for philosophy and prayer....

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Rini Shibu 20 May 2018

Very funny..you made readers laugh So you want to visit your past

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