Lizard Painting Poem by Soran M. H

Lizard Painting

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Lizard Painting
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You wanted to go out
pulled the door hard
but it didn't open
you saw the elevator on TV
open automatically
and close on empty space,
then looked at the ceiling
saw a lizard, static such as in painting
looking at you! .
heard the sound
of breaking glasses
A raging wind entered from the window
you turned around quickly
there was a huge corpse
lying on the floor of the room
before you could
complete your movement
the ghost disappeared
you said: Maybe it's
blurred vision!
while the door handle was still in your grip
the last drop of water dripped from the tap
onto the brain board
vibrates,
you looked outside
saw the fig trees withered
You didn't understand the connection
between water and spirit!
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 March 2025

' saw a lizard, static such in painting, ...looking at you.. ' magnificent and gripping lines, so haunting! Top Marks!

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Soran M. H 03 March 2025

I consider your poetic comments as a medal around the neck of my poem. Whenever I read your poems and comments, I feel as if I am in a quiet meadow next to an ocean shore. Bless you. only you as a reader is enough for me.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 March 2025

The images and poetic expressions made indelible marks in the reader's mind. Powerful write! So thought provoking!

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