Thursday, June 24, 2010

Living With My Dreams Comments

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The river stands
barren under cloudless sky
where his dry stare
wraps on glitters of hot sands
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Sahar Sahar
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Afzal Shauq 03 July 2010

each stanza of this poem seems a poem with an idea.. i really love this poem..i commented this in facebook but here during reading your more poems.. i stopped here and read it maybe more than 4 times and enjoyed it alot..very deep and meaningful is this..the ideas containing in different stanzas.. beautifully hug each other in the last.. fantastic... well done great poet

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