Living Ungodly Comments

allan, When is born such questions, especially in a verse, it already lifts spirit.... Good work... Thanks for fine the comment. 10... best wishes, Tsira

A wonderful poem is written, love it. Concluding lines are beautiful. My 10 for it.

It's a new you, bravely deliverance of self esteem!

This is a beautiful way of saying you are starting a knew life. Lovely word use and it gave me a sense of hope. Loved it.

Dear Allan, you have a very good future in poetry. Continue to read good poetry and you will answer your question 'Who lives on me' (God and Good Poetry is the answer) . I give you 10 (I hope to keep it)

Beautiful poem. Hopefully you continue to write- i lok forward to reading more