Living Truth Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

Living Truth

Rating: 5.0


I write today of living,
My years of loving you.
I take note of my passing,
A milestone, one or two.

The milestone that I noticed,
The one you'll notice too;
The one that points me homeward,
My love, still strong and true.

The milestone nearly missing,
My truth of life, no less;
Noting I still love you so,
Though obvious, I guess.

It seems it's just been moments,
But no, it's many years;
That portion of my lifetime,
Spent loving you in tears.

I've got all love required.
Though saying it is wrong;
What's left of this, my lifetime,
Will not be quite as long.

Today, I'll take for granted
This truth until I die;
Still solaced by the knowledge,
My love, was not a lie.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Alvarez 09 September 2008

Very true i liked this poem but many more to explore..

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Omar Ali Sabar 29 August 2008

A very drawing, heartfelt, beautifully produced poem... 10/10

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Kholekile Monakali 27 August 2008

the truth can get you out of problem but also it can put you into a problem, in relation to this poem it seems as if it can set you free.

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Corey Threet 12 August 2008

Wow that's a really deep poem thnx for sharing the love you'll share everyone should share in your love so I suggest you. Spread yourself! ! ! !

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Chitra - 01 August 2008

nice write! enjoyed reading it

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Cristy Upshaw 03 June 2009

intriguing and delightful read. enotions well displayed.

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James Timothy Jarrett 04 October 2008

Very nice and loving poem. Poetry it's what real men do.

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Lily Law 28 September 2008

a poem that touched every readers.. nice..

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Sathyanarayana M V S 20 September 2008

So touching and moving...makes the read weep...feel his heart heavy....Terrific piece...awesome

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Mimi Mata 11 September 2008

Greenwolfe 1962, I am visiting my hometown in San Diego right now, away form my soulmate because of the problems my disorder has put us through. I fight, struggle and endure through Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD) . And We needed time to separate in order to conquer our obstacles and realize our mistakes...I am a survivor of abuse, neglect, in-justice, starvation, deprivation...and rape...I almost died...This poem you wrote reminds me that our love will conquer over mine and his fears...This poem humanitizes... With All My Respect, Mimi C. Mata

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