Friday, April 5, 2013

Living Things (Containers Of God) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lingering upon my walls,
Motionless.
Heavy clouds of souls mixing with the water below
Cold sense ran through my blood
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Ofentse Mercy Hajane (The Dark So'tho Seer)
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Chinedu Dike 17 September 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful poem written with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Ofentse.

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 April 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Ofentse. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Ofentse Mercy Hajane (The Dark So'tho Seer)

Ofentse Mercy Hajane (The Dark So'tho Seer)

South Africa/ Johannesburg/ Krugersdorp/ Munsieville
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