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Go! And get it, its looking nice
Devour it at once, tasty, it should be
Munch and swallow. Enjoying.......aren't you?
Now, ........ Feel consequences and
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Wonderful poem, Jayatissa. One should never commit without first examining.
Yes Kelly, that's one thing. Other thing is, underneath every pleasure, always there is a hidden pain in life. Thank you for encouraging us.
This is great! I feel the extended metaphor....the biting and swallowing, the being hooked, and finally finding myself reeled in. You've written about a great life lesson. Thanks for sharing.
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8/11/2025 6:45:57 AM # 1.0.0
We do not know where danger lurks. Behind something that may look very attractive outwardly there can be a trap! So we have to proceed in life with real caution! Great lesson!
Thank you Valsa for your comment.