Sunday, April 15, 2007

Living In The Heart's Memory Comments

Rating: 2.0

A gentle touch upon the forearm
with a hand, gloved or warm with life,
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Michael Shepherd
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Gina Onyemaechi 15 April 2007

Love the opening sections in particular, Mikey, - so beautifully expressed. Love, Gina.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 15 April 2007

The whole creation is one single act of love-What a fine finish! Another 28 to reach 1000. Well done. .

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Not a member No 4 15 April 2007

I'll try again! ! '.... warm with life, ' '.... the pressure point, where empathetic camaraderie should be applied' '.... as precise as any equation of the calculated world, the heart's memories: ' As much as your deft phrasing and handling of genuinely atmospheric language, it's your sharp eye for telling detail as exemplified by the above and many other quality lines that elevate this into the league of the very best. Authentically moving, this epitomises to perfection the atmosphere of the aftermath, its many moods and rationale. Authoritative writing of the highest order. jim

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