Living In Self-Centered Spontaneity Comments

A wonderful necessary comment about this very issue which dismounts charity and tolerance. Thank you for your profound thoughts, Paul

Powerful reflection on negative freedom (freedom from) versus positive freedom (freedom to become) . Negative freedom is often merely just an illusion of freedom. True freedom is to be found in the freedom to actualize one's potential in an unfettered becoming through others and in the inward journey. Nicely penned.

A perceptive and insightful poem. Each stanza is imbued with wisdom. Well crafted and executed write.

Cultivating idea of personal freedom one can grow and his thought will definitely help him to improve relationship. This is an excellent poem beautifully penned.10