Living In Memory. Comments

We had the present as future.... Now passed Over as unwanted gain, it painfully it is very touching ans simple poem with very good message..it will be past tomorrow and si will be case with us too...i liked it....10 read mine yes to to innocence regained

touching poem...so fabulous in figurative language used! ! ! ! ! ! ! well done...10

A lovely poem - widows lament - I found it very touching. Kind regards Ann

Fay, 'lovelight' is beautiful a word. Also the poem is very special and remarkable... 10... Best wishes, Tsira

A very poignant piece about lost love Fay, but at least the memories of happy bygone loving days still stay alive

It's always sad when love ends, but at least there is memory lane to revert back to in fondness, 10 Lynda xx

A very sad poem, Fay. You've certainly captured the feeling of regret. 'We had the present as future...now passed' is a great line! S :)