Monday, November 25, 2013

Living In Harmony Comments

Rating: 5.0

Perhaps someday
in another space
two worlds meet again
coming face to face
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Heather Burns
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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 03 December 2013

simple but meaningful i love your diction very nice poem

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Dee Corpolongo 01 December 2013

Heather, this is a masterpiece, put together so descriptively and precise! I love it... What a simple poem that holds such great advice! Beautifully done.

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Nader Baheri 29 November 2013

fabulous especially the ending.between the twilight with love time can be stopped.~nb

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Valsa George 28 November 2013

In another twilight across crystal seas you and I together living in harmony Beautiful whim.... Lovely poem! I invite you to read my poem The Delight in Harmony!

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Dave Walker 27 November 2013

A great poem, some say that there is other universes where we all have a double.

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Ken E Hall 27 November 2013

Would'nt it be lovely your thoughts ruling the cosmos with harmony with a loved one and the world in harmony too..loved it..regards.

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Sina Farajzadeh 27 November 2013

Hi. Nothing is impossible. I read your poem and it was nicely written. Thank You. Good Luck

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Yasmin Khan 26 November 2013

Visions of love are described very beautifully. The poem strikes an optimistic note

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 26 November 2013

you and I together living in harmony Beautiful thought of love coming back. Thank you.

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Lucifera Santez 26 November 2013

peaceful and beautiful. you define beauty of words, its so calm and serene. while reading it you get a feeling of being caught in serene melody. its amazing. i love it. :)

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Paul Brookes 26 November 2013

Nice sentiments if only men weren't so greedy and hateful Enjoyed reading it thanks for sharing BB : O)

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Sekharan Pookkat 25 November 2013

not you and I together we are all together living in harmony and peace sharing resources together

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Sekharan Pookkat 25 November 2013

not you and I together we are all together living in harmony and peace sharing resources togethr

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