Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Living In Despair Comments

Rating: 4.5

No ones knows just how I feel,
Or what pain I hold inside.
Know one knows just how bad,
I wish I could hide.
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Mary Murphy
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Linda Weischedel 06 June 2009

I can feel a good bit of this here peom. Good job Mary......I give you a 10.

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Louis Rams 03 December 2008

I DID'NT GET TO READ THIS UNTIL NOW AND I GIVE IT A 10 BECAUSE MOST PEOPLE ARE SUPERFICIAL AND THEY ONLY LOOK AT THE OUTSIDE BUT NOT THE INSIDE. GREAT JOB AND GOD BLESS

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Seema Chowdhury 19 November 2008

such a lovely and emotional poem. i liked it. its a bitter truth that people go for the looks and outside show, they don't go ddep to see what is happening inside.

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