Wednesday, January 9, 2008

Living In A Tomb Comments

Rating: 5.0

This house is in a state of unrest
I'm trying so hard to do my best
picking up pieces of the dead, thats my goal
along with this career, i realize that i have no soul
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neo riddick
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Matthew Walton 07 June 2009

Wonderful poem. I can really relate to every emotion you express. well done

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Amelia Lee 11 January 2009

This is by far one of your best poems yet. So many feelings are put into words. An amazing work of art

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foxy babii 28 January 2008

so true beautiful poem i like it

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