Sunday, June 29, 2008

Living Idol Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her face is black and shiny
like a just burnished ebony!
When Sun rays swept
through the beads of her cold sweat
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Sathya Narayana
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Meena Iyer 23 December 2008

ah lot more better than me :) Loved it.. but yeah definitely similar in content :)

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Mamta Agarwal 03 November 2008

this is a heart wrenching poem coming from a highly gifted and compassionate heart. common women- as Raj says real miss india. i feel they need to be treated with dignity and respect and not like a piece of furniture. you really got into the psyche of a woman, Sathya10+its a great tribute to womanhood, and sir i salute you... mamta

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Raj Nandy 22 October 2008

All our unsung rustic maidens who perform their daily chores in silence , and when need be, also drink their own tears, are our country's back bone, they are my real Miss India! Thanks for this beautiful poem, - Raj Nandy

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Aijaz Asif 24 September 2008

bhayya you took the words from my thoghts, a silent tear drops inside when i see that much suffering, pain and misery on that most beautiful creature a gift from god made for this ugly and selfish creature....i give it 10+++'s with my respectful bow for such beautiful heart

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Indira Babbellapati 30 July 2008

this too is another painting from your brush...

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Kevin Wells 02 July 2008

It is a great shame that women are still treated this way throughout the world. Of course, arranged marriages are difficult to comprehend in the western society and it would be easy for me to condemn them but ignorance and contempt are shown towards women in and outside of marriage all over the Earth, within every social structure and religion. You have captured the outrage, the pain and injustice in your words. Thank you for your comments about 'Butterfly'. It was based upon someone I knew some years ago who was regularly mistreated and bullied by her possessive and jealous husband. Your poem is masterful - well-written and well observed. Great!

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Kesav Easwaran 29 June 2008

that is why she emerges at times as Adi Para Sakthy in mundane life too; though, rarely so...outlook and observation highly compassionate... good write

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