Saturday, October 25, 2008

Living Green At The Recycling Center Comments

Rating: 5.0

the first time I had no eyeballs
just empty sockets
but I could sense the glow of galaxies against my cheek
and lust for the imaginable beauty
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Lee Crowell
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Callie Carroll 31 October 2008

1st stanza- Expressed exquisitely the extreme sensitivity when other senses are shut down. (closely observed by my contact with a blind student, but never captured and sung by me. Alas) 2nd stanza- I have done all of those; you made me relish them, ...belatedly. 3rd stanza- Ruthless in its power.I really enjoyed this.

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