Friday, December 13, 2013

Living Free Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting here just doing me
Living wild, being free
Alone I lay in my bed
Thoughts of you running through my head
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Cynthia Carpenter
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Khairul Ahsan 07 February 2014

Your poem is captivating! I have rated it 10/10. 'But you brought me out, you made me whole Now you have a corner of my soul You made me who I am today Free of my sorrows I've begun to lay Lay down the burdens of my past So that mine and your love can last' - A melodious song!

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Gary H 22 January 2014

: -) well done thats for true.

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Cynthia Carpenter

Cynthia Carpenter

jacksonville, flordia
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