Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Living Flame Comments

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What is a glowing filament
Compared to a flame?
It is still, silent;
It is dead
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Kaitlin Bianca
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Anita Trivedi 04 August 2010

I just loved the way you've written this one........ Amazinggggggggg.............

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Kayla Alleman 03 July 2010

Very intriguing. I love the way you give the flame traits only to yet again take them away.

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Manonton Dalan 14 March 2010

catchy analogy... very nice poem. thanks. md. come visit my poems too

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