Saturday, June 20, 2020

Living Eternally Comments

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Snakes are hissing,
Sharks gaping their mouths,
Lions roaring
And slave-owners setting their traps;
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Sayeed Abubakar
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Sayeed Abubakar 21 June 2020

A lot of thanks to Rini Markie, Kumarmani Mahakul and Mahbub Bangalee for their comments on this poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2020

Life is not safer in forest, water, or caves or society because of growing pollution in environment and noncooperation and violence in society. People need to live safer life. Life is full of struggle. Still men carry the hope of living. Birth leads to death but still man has to work. Living eternally man can feel life's essence. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 June 2020

But dying for making the better earth Is not called dying. It is called living, Living eternally....wow greatly written on the universal welfare thought Live here Live there Live everywhere O heart Die, you can die everywhere But do not live or die meaninglessly Do something, do always something best for the world and live to die or die to live eternally

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