Living Dead Girl Comments

I adore this one. It reminds me quite a lot of the girl I like. So much that it near made me cry, in fact. It is very good.

geat visuals, very vivid images

its really good, the tension of wanting to know what happens and how it ends, keeps your eyes moving down the screen. well done

I like the way you gradually increase the sense of drama and terror

very nice piece of work you wrote. great job! -Justin

Very nicely put and very creative. I wish you best of luck to continue writing poems like that. Good job.

Interesting poem. Very Nice.

great job. looks like something i would write at times.

kinda reminds me of somethin i would write...good job man