Thursday, June 14, 2012

Living An Illusion Comments

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Life is an illusion
Coz when we die, we were the intrusion
We came by love, and depart by hate
All the way living till our last state.
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Justin Wright 03 August 2012

Excellent poem I love it.

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Locura Alaam 14 June 2012

A fabulous poem; good use of rhymes. I loved the Cuz when we die, we were the intrusion... I find it intense

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