Wednesday, July 19, 2006

Living A Lie Comments

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Hold it all in she tells herself
As she walks by holding her breath
Just to keep from crying out to him
She quickens her pace to keep from
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Jennifer Sol
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Ruby Root 19 July 2006

Hi Jennifer, Great poem, but I will be honest. People can shut down. If they are fed enough they shut down to the situation. I am great at it. If your in a situation and you don't want to feel it is easy to do it. Excellent poem, Take care.

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