Saturday, May 10, 2008

Living A Giant Puzzle Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are living a giant puzzle

With pieces all a-swirl
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Anita Atina
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Al Ramos 21 May 2008

You are the missing piece to my mysterious puzzle. Write on.

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Junior Pocoloco 10 May 2008

Anita You put things so well on the page. You grab things, anything and use them as the vehicle to deliver your song to us. Another good one here.

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David Harris 10 May 2008

Anita, how you right about are lives being a giant puzzle. It is when the pieces don't fit then we know we are in trouble. Or if there is a piece missing, we know that too. There is none of that in this beautiful poem. All the pieces fit perfectly and there is not one missing there. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. David

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