Living Comments

A very true write? We all live till it is time to clock off! ........well penned Dave

True, marching towards end, but with face and soul upright.10+++

This is a beautiful poem on life and death having a nice theme which we can find out in last stanza. Thanks for sharing.

A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. It captures the realities of life. Liked the final stanza. Striking lines. Well penned.

The circularity of life We tread out our days Our tragedy id we know we will die our blessing we don't know when Great poem certainly made me think.

In these foot steps I have walked a thousand miles to get back home, .......... great done,10

Fantastic poem with emotion, thanks for sharing

In these thoughts of mine! ! To dine with life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.