Saturday, September 16, 2006

Livin In The Hospital Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shes starring at the ceiling.
With her hand to her face.
Wondering what put her in this god for saking place.
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Tiara Neal
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I really liked this 1. It's painful and really strong. Keep writing Rissa: -)

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Robert Moher 17 September 2006

well this poem is giving a view of this person life that others cant see or are giving a chance to see

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Uriah Hamilton 17 September 2006

A very dark painful poem, life is a struggle.

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Steve Hagget 16 September 2006

Great poem - I enjoyed the line 'confused her concentration' Thanks Steve

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Tiara Neal

Tiara Neal

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